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    Please read

    Would anyone here be kind enough to write me a poem about love but cant be together becuase the mother doesnt approve? thank you SO much

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    The band Disturbed have a song like that, there singer was dating a young latina girl and because of different cultures the mother of the girl didnt approve. Just cant remember there song name off the top of my head but at least you know other people out there all face common problems. As for the poem ill give it a shot...

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    thank you

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    i dno if this is any good cos i only just got up really and it gave me summin to do, if its shit let me know haha.

    I see you in my eyes and in my dreams,
    I long to be with you so much,
    Check me out now and see that I’m true,
    Your special but things are out of touch.

    Why do we face conflict in our life?
    Can’t she see we want to be happy?
    The mother and her protective hands,
    Simply they elude myself from her.

    You know me to be true,
    If not would I be feeling this way?
    I no longer have a clue,
    What is it I am meant to do now?

    Words are spoken and barriers put down,
    Can’t this woman just let life play out?
    See it is that I want to be happy?
    Now I’m surrounded by a cloud of doubt,

    Feeling rearranged I cant think about it,
    Love is such a weird emotion,
    It makes us hurt in times we don’t need to,
    Causes too much commotion.

    Just let life play out please and see love breaks all barriers,
    That’s is the way life is meant to be played out, by our own hands.

    I dont know the situation so basically thats the best i could do with the little info i had.

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    that basicly sums it up thank you very much

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