One Moment More

[Gypsybell]

Take one moment more
To hold my hand again
If only life was ours
I cannot bear the pain

Take one moment more
To gaze into my eyes
Know that I am yours
Beyond our last goodbyes

Take one moment more
Then darling, drift away
I will hold you in my heart
Forever and a day.

[Miss_winter]

this actually bring tears into my eyes right at this moment. this is how i'm feeling too..

[Gypsybell]

Did you lose someone?

[Miss_winter]

Did you lose someone?

Yes. She's still alive, though. How about you?

[Gypsybell]

No, He's gone. Sort've puts other trivia in perspective. Never be afraid to love your guts out. That 'over the top' effort makes a difference. I see people holding back because of pride or fear of not getting what they give and so nobdy gives and it just dries up. If you starve love, how can it grow. If you have lost love, take half the blame (it always takes two) and forgive the other. Be a better person before expecting a better partner. Be positive. If you give all you've got, then you will have nothing to regret, for what you give returns to you. Never forget that. I wish you well.

[lane1777]

very nice work, and I happen to agree with your comment..give it everything you have. have a great day. Lane

[aceuno15]

Nice poem, but to clear up your rhymes... Again and pain do not rhyme, unless you really butcher how you say again!

Well done though!

[Kokz143]

Beautifully jotted down.