my bf wrote for me

[siennal]

Your eyes.
Like a calm ocean of wonder.
I constantly sail across at a steady pace simply overwhelmed by their beauty.

You hair.
Like a golden field of wheat that is never-ending in my heart.

I wish I could say more.
I am blinded, deafened and muted by your love.

But then instantly revived by your inspiring voice.
It's equivalent to eating a hot fudge sundae.
Sprinkled with hugs and kisses.
And as soon as the ice cream touches my lips, I am filled with a warm felling.

Honestly, I need you.
You are the only person I've ever loved this much.
Losing you would be like losing myself through and awful death.

But always having you with me is like being reborn into an almost perfect life of love and eternal happiness.

I want you to know that all of this is coming directly from my heart, reserved just for you.

In other words, I love you.

[hoggy522]

Awww that is so sweet
You have a good guy there, i wrote poems for my ex but she didnt appreciate them really....

[mel2208]

awww...how lovely..so romantic!! hes deffo a keeper hun x not many ppl appreciate it anymore..shame really...such a nice way to express ones feelings to a loved one x

[celebritydiscod]

Does the first line refer to your eyes? - He must ever really like you, or genuinely think that he does!!(?) It`s romantic.

[sookie6]

Boring...but redeemed by the hot fudge bit

[Miloo]

just when all hope was lost.
romance isn't ALL lost, its just very little of it.
i advice u take care of him, he really loves you.

[VanessaFR]

Wow, that was really sweet.

Think I'm gonna dig out some old love notes to share too. Nice subforum.

[ispoky]

Thank you for the tender words