This never ending pain

[batista]

Ok this is my first poem i ever made and i hope that it came out good... I don't know what inspired me... Tell me what you think of it




I'm glad you're here
there was nothing to fear,
i wondered from the start
what set us apart

Now you left with someone else
he gave you the love
we once shared

I wonder what happened,
to the love we once had
you made me cry
you made me bleed
deep down inside
where my heart is so weak

Now i'm here with nobody else
Left all alone
in this dark cold land
but why would you care

I'm left all alone
with nothing to share
i wondered why
i wondered how
i even asked the ocean blue sky

You and me was all i had
now that it's gone
i parted from the life i once had
I saw the golden stairs
going up to heaven


I parted from life
coz you were all i had
it hurt so bad
that's the reason why i'm dead

Your pictures that you left behind
are just memories of a different life
To touch your lips, to hold you near
what i gave up was my fear

Now it's all over
i'm waiting here
all alone
until the day you will come along.

Now i'm waiting for you to be here
kiss me tender one last time
so i can wipe my tears
and finally say goodbye
To the love we once shared

[Tan11]

It's good. I like it.

[RSK]

fantastic! i like it a lot!