What do you think of this message?

[nAzGiRl05]

Hello,
I've written the following message for a guy that I met a few weeks ago at a group dinner party, that my friend had arranged. and I needed your help to see how well-put it is; cuz I want it to be casual, but I want it to draw his attention a little bit, too.
Please let me know if I should make any changes to it. Thanks!!!

Hello [his_name], how are you doing?
This is Nazli btw, [my friends's name]'s friend. I was just thinking about the evening that we all went out to dinner, and I thought I'd write you a quick note to see how you've been.

feel free to email me back when you get the chance.

[myname]

P.S: How's studying for MCATs going?

(Because he told me he was studying for MCATs, so I thought it'd be nice to let him know I remember)

[Tone]

Sounds good *thumbs up*

[nAzGiRl05]

thanks!!! so do you think this is too short by any chance? I mean I don't want to make it longer, but I'm just worried that it might be a little short.
please let me know.

Sounds good *thumbs up*

[Tone]

Nope not at all!

Direct, and to the point, no BSing around ;p

[nAzGiRl05]

sounds good, thanks!

[Rosebud]

can I ask something??? Didn't you post a similar thread about the same thing????