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[BackFire]

Something ive been working on

It Started So Well But Now We Hang Our Heads In Shame,
The Way You Let Me Take The Blame, It'll Never Be The Same,
Your Too Deep In The Game, I Can See Traces Of Rust,
Beg Me Not To Say I Hate The Way You Lace Me With Trust,
I Constantly Beg And Plead Will You Cease And Desist
I Long To Set You Free And Release You From This,
The First Incision Of Scars, You Forget The Decision Is Ours,
Eating Away At Yourself While I Just Stare At The Stars,
Nothing I Can Do,And I Feel Obsolete In Your Vision,
Trapped With Silence,I Can Just Wait And Watch The Final Collision,
There Seems To Be No Hope, As I Sit And Watch This Torment,
I Cant Cope So I Ponder Where The Hell All The Happiness Went,
The Final Descent Rushing Towards The Wall Of Animosity
And By All Means You Were Vengefully Vanquished By Curiosity
This Monstrosity Got The Better Of You, But It Wont Hold Me,
Your Story Has Sold Me, I'll Always Remember What You Told Me
"Life Is What You Make It,You Need To Lie To Survive,
But Be True To Yourself Or Otherwise You Wont Make It Out Alive!"
Now We Live Seperate Lives,Never Forget You Were My Pearl
But In The End Its Just An Ugly Picture Of A Beautiful Girl

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The Final Descent Rushing Towards The Wall Of Animosity
And By All Means You Were Vengefully Vanquished By Curiosity

the two lines that caught me. are you a beginner writer? no offense, but there is a lot of forced rhyming in this. if you just ease it on through, it would be a lot better. it might even sound better if you changed it to instead of rhyme, say it a different way.

poems dont always have to rhyme. and rhyming is slightly abused in this piece