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    I just felt inspired

    My world a raging torment
    the blinding pain smothers my sanity
    I hold the knife , cold against soft skin
    a moments wait ,then the sharp scream of pain
    Blood and steel mix ,and I wonder what I've gained
    These things have grown. my insecurites and fears
    I think of her, I need no knife to bleed my tears
    Another scar I've made , the token of a fool
    And I think for all this time , she used me as her tool

    I dont go round slashing my wrists all the time ...just to clarify things
    Last edited by gartlas; 27-01-09 at 08:15 AM. Reason: to make it better-er
    "Nobody , so long as he moves about among the chaotic currents of life , is without trouble. Carl jung

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    oh great....
    The male is a domestic animal which, if treated with firmness, can be trained to do most things

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    lol I dunno why I wrote that..I just suddenly felt like it. that came out in like 2 minutes , and I changed about one line afterwards,,I wasnt aiming to write an emo- poem XD
    "Nobody , so long as he moves about among the chaotic currents of life , is without trouble. Carl jung

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    i sit on my bed
    put a gun to my head

    can't wait for the pain to erase
    when the bullet enters my brain
    The male is a domestic animal which, if treated with firmness, can be trained to do most things

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    now that is even more depressing , and nowhere near as deep *does victory dance*
    "Nobody , so long as he moves about among the chaotic currents of life , is without trouble. Carl jung

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    wow, some intense stuff! i was notorious for these kinds of poems when i first joined lf (i think).. i'm going to try have another crack.

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    Hi

    Hi,
    This is onlinev from canada. I am a newbie of this site and i think this site has a lot to provide to the visitors.
    onlinev

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    [ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G8Drrqx9JkA"]YouTube - emo elmo[/ame]
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    I just registered and this was the first thread i visited...very interesting.

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    i so inlove with those poem. great. thanks for sharing!

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