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Thread: Write me a poem, she said.

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    Write me a poem, she said.

    Your words mean nothing, a ring means less.
    You act like you have it all together, but your life is a ****ing mess.
    I stood by you for such a while.
    You said "we", but it was I who passed trial, after trial.
    Your run is over now, it's time to say goodbye.
    I'm going to find love now, I'm leaving you behind because I know without me, you'll die.


    Not my best work, but it fits recent events.

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    Very self obssessed but

    Effective
    Don't cry, don't regret and don't blame
    Weak find the whip, willing find freedom
    Towards the sun, carry your name
    In warm hands you are given
    Ask the wind for the way
    Uncertainty's gone, your path will unravel
    Accept all as it is and do not blame
    God or the Devil
    ~Born to Live - Mavrik~

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    Yeah,that's why it's not my best work. I usually write general poems that anybody can relate to. This one was more "my world, about me" type, but I actually like it after reading it a few more times.

    Each lines holds a deep personal meaning, guess ya just gotta be me and go through the things I did to see it.

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    What a bitter poem.
    Second thoughts can generally be amended with judicious action; injudicious actions can seldom be recovered with second thoughts.
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    lol that's an angry poem right there, but gets its point across

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