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Thread: 2nd attempt...

  1. #1
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    2nd attempt...

    I wander in the busy city
    Losing my way in it, how shitty
    Every single day I am looking
    For the smile I see in my memory

    But I know we just cannot be together
    Because you think I do not matter
    So now I wish the one meant for me
    Is just down this very alley

    I've been looking and looking
    But I can't find anyone
    Who is nearly as good as you
    Why can't you just be more accepting?

    This world is everchanging and makes us feel so insignificant
    Let us just be lovers, before this game leaves us both burnt?

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    Again GB, you have captured an emotion forever in this poem. Well done!

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