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    Death of a flame

    Hollowed frames & broken glass
    a pair of scissors
    memorys scattered
    we thought it would last
    but its come to my indication
    none of it really mattered
    I lost myself in you
    now im finding out
    figuring out how it is to live without

    Lieing awake in bed all those times
    I burned a candle
    I had made you my Angel
    fair as light
    that moment when the sun peaks high
    that was you smiling bright
    but its over now
    my love burned away like a candle in the night

    We are the death of a flame
    I seen our lives vanish
    cant say I wanna know
    what happens next
    Like a headgame
    Without you I feel blind
    The need for tears on my mind
    It attacks with silence
    I dont wanna go

    Lieing awake in bed
    I burned a candle
    I had made you my Angel
    fair as light
    that moment when the sun peaks
    that was you smiling bright
    but its over now
    my love burns away like a candle in the night

  2. #2
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    We are the death of a flame
    I seen our lives vanish
    cant say I wanna know
    what happens next
    Like a headgame
    Without you I feel blind
    The need for tears on my mind
    It attacks with silence
    I dont wanna go

    wonderful ...very beautiful poem with those sad words and fired feelings ....congratulation dear u have a good pen

    allah bless u always
    my God ...Allah .... i love you

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