quick help needed winning girl's heart...

[bedheadfrstkiss]

in competition to win the heart of a beautiful young lady who's in an abusive relationship, losing her self esteem, and is at a very pivitol point in her life right now, i need to find the most romantic comeback for this little saying that he has for her, "very few can say they've captured a goddess..." with captured being the key word here. She's never been in love before and i believe she's falling pretty hard for me. but she's scared and doesn't believe in herself enough to do what's best for her. I've done all that i can do for now, i just kinda have to sit back and wait, but this would be a great little final touch.

best i've come up with is something like "...but only one make can make her feel like a goddess" or "there's only one who makes her feel like a goddess". they'll probably both see it so i wanted it to undercut him and make her heart melt if you know what i mean.

maybe something about not capturing a goddess or "but he who does..."

i'm not the best with words, i'm sure someone has something better.

any help is appreciated, thx

[krondragon]

To be honest, how would you feel if you used a line that you did not come up with? I would love to help, but it'll feel more satisfying if you yourself make the effort.

Do your best and I wish you the best of luck.