Moments captured in Space

[RSK]

I was thinking a little too deep when I wrote this one, what I like to call, thinking while I'm thinking! Probably doesn't make sense.

Saturn's discs are circling rings
And Jupiter commands its gaseous mix
The Stars between are gazing on
As these two Giants look at us
The space between
Is a vacuum
with silent memory
and time gone by
But as the light years
filter through
Their memory fades
And leaves a mark
So as I look at her rings
And even Jupiter's Commanding size
It's like I look into a mirror
I see her scar and his face
And the Careless choices that we make
They are reflections of human race
Time will leave us
But memories stay
Choices we make
Are reflected each day
The moments are captured
In outer space
And they shine a light
That reflect to remind us
To live a life
Pure and True
So as I look at Saturn's Rings
And also Jupiter's Commanding Size
I try my best to be kind
And in my heart, happiness I'll find

[IndiReloaded]

Small, we are, but beautiful still. A mere Mote in God's Eye:

[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Mote_in_God's_Eye[/url]

[Gossioii5]

Excellent tips .I really appreciate all these points, and I agree completely…

[Millymalla]

Beautifull