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    I love your existence

    Perfection is defined when your heart beats next to mine,
    and time stands still for us.
    My hand in your hair,
    and yours on my chest.
    Moments with you are my lifes best.

    We crossed paths for a reason
    The planets aligned in that particular season
    Its clear to me that well eventually be
    Inseparable

    I love your existence
    and I cant get enough

    Your song is sung in your beautiful voice
    My senses rush cause they have no other choice
    I breathe you in, and I see through your eyes.
    You are an angel in a beautiful disguise.

    We crossed paths for a reason
    The planets aligned in that particular season
    Its clear to me that well eventually be
    Inseparable

    I love your existence
    and I cant get enough

    So pucker up and embrace the greatness, you get me high and erase my sadness.
    I love your existence, and I cant get enough

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    that was cute!

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    Nice

    I love the poem. It really neat. I gone to your poem for my love. thx you.

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    nice choice of words, well written

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    Wow, that was impressive, keeping the cold out on this snowy day.

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    Decent poem man, i liked it... isnt it funny how love brings the best out of us.
    Life is about experiences... not what you have parked outside.

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    That's a great poem...thanks for sharing!

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    I like the definiton of perfection. Wonderful.

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    Omg I love this! Made me think of my boyfriend. Awww I miss him now LOL!

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    I don't know, I like love poems..but I thought it was kind of lame. Specially how the "I love your existence and I cant get enough" doesn't fit or rhyme at all.
    "Why are you an atheist?"
    "because I paid attention in science class."

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