I would never bealive if i didn't see
So beautiful as the christmas three
Like the winter in the sky,
And if the sun would shine
I could bealive you're mine
My soul would be white
And I could dream all night
If these were really true
Then Chrismas is really you
Beautiful and immortal winter.
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I can't believe no one commented on this; I thought that was a very beautiful poem. I have always been a "fan" of rhyming couplets, or just rhyming in general in poetry, and you did a nice job with your rhymes.
Though I despise the season, this poem made me come to appreciate winter a little bit.
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Kind of you
Thank you very much for your observations Lindsay.
I'll try to make more big and beautiful poems and even one for you.
You never know.
The one feared by many, many he has to fear from.
There is no good deed without her reward.
If someone knows more than you know about yourself than that person is truly superior to you.
Remember when you judge people because you will be also judged, only worse.
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