May not be all that great...but i did it in like, 10 minutes..

[unidentified]

i was feeling sad on how i couldnt EVER be with the one i think i love...i know i know..i think i do, but i really really really do think i love her... (i am a sophmore in high school too)
my poem is below... not all great, just how i felt/feel...

What I Feel

The one I would hate to fall into, the one I would hate to adore
The one I cannot have, the one that is impossible to get
The one who I cant resist to gaze at, when she is not able, nor wants to look back
I wish I could forget her, but I cant, I just cant
I see her everyday, walking down the hall
We look affectionately towards each other, and into each other’s eyes
We both smile, with a quiet hello
We move on past our meeting place, and I, wishing we could pause at that meeting place
Forever, for eternity, for our lifetime
The first time passes bye, and the second comes when the clock reads twelve thirty-two
For 45 more minutes, I glare, much longer than the first time that day
I see a figure in front of not only me, but also many, many others
This is that makes me hide my obsession, and my craze for this affectionate person
I see that there ahead, it says m - r – s.
This makes my compassion whimper, and leak out drops of my emotion
My mind trembles, and all it thinks of how wonderful she is
How much I want to forget, move on, and accept the fact that we cannot be
The next day I walk in, and I see white along her body
The white brings out her face, and when her hair is down, she’s even more than usual
She’s beautiful, desirable
Stop, Stop I keep telling myself over and over
I cannot think, I cannot breathe
I can’t forget, I can’t just let her go
I believe I love her….
I’ve had crushes; I’ve had friendships, but not this
This is different; this is awkwardly good
I believe I love this figure
I cannot have her; she is my inspirer, my center, my life
She’s all I think about
She’s all I want
She’s everything I need
She’s everything I can’t have
I look forward to everyday, and every meeting place I see her
Then again, I wish I had never woken up
I now realize, what ever makes her happy, is best for both of us
When I see her smile, I smile
When I see her giggle, I giggle
I believe this was meant to happen
Me to see her, and fall in love with her, even though we cannot be
I wish we could be, but we will be not
She’s beautiful
She’s everything I want
She’s everything I need
She’s everything I cannot have
I go to bed now, and wish for a never ending slumber, but then again, I can’t wait until the first, and second meeting

[King of King]

you are older than me. I am Freshman so I think we have alots in common. thanks God that find u here I understand you I am same

[unidentified]

cool, king of king, you think you love a teacher too? haha...

[ghenzmitz]

cool, king of king, you think you love a teacher too? haha...

YOU'RE REALLY REALLY NASTY....COME ON....IT'S NOT GOOD TO HEAR...YOU'RE INLOVE WITH A TEACHER? OW....GREAT.....AGE DOES REALLY MATTER.....AND YOU'RE AGAINST THE NORM OF SOCIETY..YOU CAN'T HAVE HER BECAUSE SHE'S MATURE ENOUGH THAN YOU