That was actually the second thing I noticed, after the weird photo. I immediately thought, "wow, what's wrong with him?". I'm not encouraging you to lie though, it is what it is.
And I still don't like your hair. I thought it hadn't changed from the previous pictures, that's why I didn't say anything. It looks unnatural. Just let it free, don't use all that pulling-back gel or whatever it is you use.
You look very unspontaneous in your photos, this puts me off from wanting to contact you.
To be honest, another cringe-worthy phrase I noticed is the last one: don't say that you are confident and strong, because that's not the impression you get from looking at your photos and reading your profile info, and it totally looks like you're pretending to be something you're not. Again, unspontaneous.