Little Poem

[Radical]

Alright, here's how it goes in image form...

[url]http://img243.echo.cx/img243/3372/background66uc.jpg[/url]

Please tell me what you think... it's my first one.

[COAD]

The poem is good....
Design is great... But you could make the letters a bit more readable.

[artyemi]

Alright, here's how it goes in image form...

[url]http://img243.echo.cx/img243/3372/background66uc.jpg[/url]

Please tell me what you think... it's my first one.

It's nice. I like it.
One note. the "your" in the second to last line should be "you're"

[ghenzmitz]

The poem was great really...but need to make it a bit more deep....

[Radical]

Okay, I forgot to edit the you're bit, but here's a better copy...

[url]http://img56.echo.cx/img56/9199/background75zq.jpg[/url]

[Junket]

Eh.

Not my kind of poem.

That background makes it seem sappy.

Was it sappy?

I didn't read it...

[shh!]

Alright, here's how it goes in image form...

[url]http://img243.echo.cx/img243/3372/background66uc.jpg[/url]

Please tell me what you think... it's my first one.

I don't know that it is a good idea to stick the words "you're killing everything inside me" on a birthday card. That might make the recipient feel kinda bad on their birthday.

[misombra]

hey if you love somebody better set them on fire!!!

i am so damn funny sometimes i swear!

if you know what that's from you get 10 points

[shh!]

Dead Milkmen from Metaphysical Graffiti.

Gimme my 10 points!