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    Question Here's A Couple, Let Me Know What You Think

    How

    I walk,
    The anger blinding me,
    I can't believe this talk,
    How could she do this to me?

    I stare at the picture,
    It sits on the desk,
    I begin to read her scripture,
    The lies grow grotesque,

    All the lies,
    I didn't see,
    My heart slowly dies,
    How could she do this to me?

    I sit and stare,
    My eyes fill with disbelief,
    She stands there,
    Her eyes filled with grief,

    "I'm sorry," she smiles,
    I don't know what to say,
    "It's been awhile,"
    I start to move away,

    I walk to the door,
    The sadness rising in me,
    I don't want to talk to this whore,
    How could she do this to me?

    My head tells me to stay,
    My heart tells me to leave,
    I don't want it to happen this way,
    How could I have been so naive?

    I run out of the house,
    She runs after me,
    The wind blowing her blouse,
    She issues her one final plea,

    I know I was wrong,
    I was so lost,
    It's been to long,
    I can't bear the cost,

    I look at her one final time,
    The emotions rising in me,
    Words begin to climb,
    How could you do this to me?

    I run to the car,
    I don't care where I go,
    My heart begins to scar,
    It's hard to see through the snow,

    I try to think,
    My mind is numb,
    I dare to blink,
    Where did this pain come from?

    I swerve,
    It's to late,
    I hit the curb,
    So this is my fate.

    I hit a tree,
    I don't know what happened,
    It's the last thing I see,
    I know, I was abandoned,
    How could she do this to me?

    ================================================

    Sunset

    We stare across the ocean blue
    The sun nothing more than a flame
    I sing softly to you
    Whispering your name

    I look into your eyes
    They seem to tell it all
    Amazing how time goes by
    As the stars begin to fall

    My love shall never fade
    I will forever be here
    In this world we've made
    As we hold each other near

    There's anything I'd give
    Anything I'd do
    As long as I never have to live
    Another day without you.

    ================================================

    Retrospect

    As I look upon this day
    I smile on the past
    Happy that things turned out this way
    I hope it’s going to last

    All I think about is you
    I remember the day we met
    One of the lucky few
    I don’t want to go home just yet

    You are my one, my only
    The one who captured my heart
    Because of you I’m no longer lonely
    And I never want to be apart

    I can’t wait until tomorrow
    All the things that are to be
    My soul no longer hollow
    You’ll never know how much you mean to me.

    ================================================

    Death of Innocence

    These thoughts in me
    Played out before my eyes
    I’m beginning to see
    This is why I cry

    There’s no one here
    Just me alone
    No one to ease my fear
    If only I was home

    I have nowhere to go
    Nowhere to stay
    There’s no one I know
    That can make this go away


    Through all the pain
    I’m beginning to lose sight
    My heart just can’t contain
    The end of all that’s right

    If only I knew
    Which way to run
    Then maybe I’d make it through
    And out of the darkness I’d come

    Is it even worth it?
    What can I possibly do?
    This life is far from perfect
    It’s beginning to cloud my view

    I’ll find someplace to stay
    I’ll make it out alive
    Just another day
    If only I can survive

    ================================================

    My Personal War

    The emotional battles that never end
    Trying as hard as I can
    My broken heart just won't mend
    Just trying to be a better man

    What is it you want from me?
    Do you even care?
    I'm just beginning to see
    You were never even there

    I'm so alone right now
    All I need is you
    I'll figure it out somehow
    Just like I always do

    Life goes on I suppose
    I hide my secrets deep
    You're the only one who knows
    The reasons I can't sleep

    It will all end soon
    I'll be gone without a trace
    I'll sing my sorry tune
    Proving myself disgraced

    I wanted you to recognize
    No matter what they say
    Look closely into my eyes
    I'll make it back someday

    ================================================

    Let me know what you think at [email]Katalyst315@gmail.com[/email]
    Thanks,

    -Kat

    E-Mail: [email]Katalyst315@gmail.com[/email]

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    What is it that urges a person to write such beutiful things?
    The only mature way to use power, is to use it to serve those that are powerless.

    Love is an art; some paintings can be dark, some can be light- but all are beautiful.

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    Zzzzzzzz...

    *Yawn* mmhmm? huh? wha?

    I've been doing this a lot lately.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bohemiandonut
    Zzzzzzzz...

    *Yawn* mmhmm? huh? wha?

    I've been doing this a lot lately.
    You don't think they're any good?
    .:Katalyst315:.

    The stars begin to spin, the lights begin to dim, all that was will never be, as my world crashes down around me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MaRTiaL RaGe
    What is it that urges a person to write such beutiful things?
    Its called bordem.
    "Why are you an atheist?"
    "because I paid attention in science class."

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    Quote Originally Posted by Only-virgins
    Its called bordem.
    Actually it's called passion, something you'd know nothing about.
    .:Katalyst315:.

    The stars begin to spin, the lights begin to dim, all that was will never be, as my world crashes down around me.

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    Some call it bordem, some call it inspiration, some call it a way to vent emotions.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Innova
    Some call it bordem, some call it inspiration, some call it a way to vent emotions.
    Inspiration and venting yes, but we're losing sight of what this post is about.. are they any good?
    .:Katalyst315:.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Katalyst315
    Actually it's called passion, something you'd know nothing about.
    Damn ..I have been owned..That actually hurt reading it. Oh well.... I was kidding anyways.

    Actually I like the first one alot...though you cant beat my cat scratches back poem...sorry...
    "Why are you an atheist?"
    "because I paid attention in science class."

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    They are good yes. Very cliche, but at the same time people will call human emotion cliche. The point they don't seem to understand however, is that it's emotion in your words, and in your eyes.

    I look at my poetry as a reflection of both myself and the world around me, I share it with others...but how I feel about it is what matter most.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Katalyst315
    You don't think they're any good?
    Post one at a time. I started to read the first, and then scrolled down...

    and down...

    and down some more...

    Hence, "Zzzzzzz..."

    I'll try to read them soon, and let you know.

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