My girl wrote this poem to me at the pizza place, while we were waiting for our food. I would have cried if people weren't watching.
It's sweet:
I Can See Myself
I dont need to have a crystal ball
To see what the future will be
It's hazy for everyone else
But it's clearly you and me
I can see myslef with you
Because I'm with you now
Even if I'm a lean mean girl
Or some old fat cow
I can see myslef with you
Holding tight your hand
Seeing your pretty blue eyes
Wearing a wedding band
I can see myself laughing
Crying with tears in my eyes
I can feel myself hurting
Even with just for a while goodbyes
I can see myself years and years from now
You'll be happy and so will I
It's a feeling, a love, that'll last
Right up with me when I die
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12-08-08, 01:53 PM #1
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My Girl's Poem To Me
"Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies." -Aristotle
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16-09-08, 08:49 AM #2
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thats a sweet poem...i like it!
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08-04-10, 01:45 PM #3
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Really Romantic & full of emotions a & feelings.
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10-04-10, 01:27 AM #4
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how lovely..really nice to read
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02-07-10, 10:52 PM #5
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I like it, I am not gonna change it because it means a lot to you. Since It is from your hear, only can revise it. Very well done.
We must be the change we want to see
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06-07-10, 01:10 PM #6
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It sounds like you want to critique this love poem.
Originally Posted by princehole
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13-07-10, 02:35 PM #7
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Real nice poem ~~~like it
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18-07-10, 12:33 PM #8
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wow, so sweet...if someone wrote something like that for me, i'd probably cry too
♥ the love you take is equal to the love you make ♥
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31-07-10, 11:40 AM #9
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That is great. I would have probably cried too.
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04-08-10, 10:55 AM #10
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I don't like it. I mean it has a good intent and it's the thought that counts. But the poem itself is pretty weak.
Last edited by Mish; 04-08-10 at 10:58 AM.
Don't cry, don't regret and don't blame
Weak find the whip, willing find freedom
Towards the sun, carry your name
In warm hands you are given
Ask the wind for the way
Uncertainty's gone, your path will unravel
Accept all as it is and do not blame
God or the Devil
~Born to Live - Mavrik~
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17-08-10, 07:46 PM #11
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thanks aloooooooooooooooot
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13-09-10, 12:02 PM #12
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I don't like it either.
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Nice Poem. I really love reading poems. Thanks for sharing.
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This poem would be cute if it didnt have the 'marry me or die' tone to it...
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Isn't that sweet I am in love with your girl
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