When I Close My Eyes

[abejareina1989]

When I close my eyes,
all I see is your face.
The first time we met,
the moments I could never forget.

I dream of being near you,
dream of the day when we can be as one.

I hope that day comes,
then all my pain will be gone.


First draft, but hey.. I attempted lol. I LOVE writing

[AdminOnline]

Sweet

Good one.

[kirig]

When I close my eyes,
all I see is your face.
The first time we met,
the moments I could never forget.

I dream of being near you,
dream of the day when we can be as one.

I hope that day comes,
then all my pain will be gone.

nice poem

[freakme619]

I like the poem. So loving and caring and touching.