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    immaculate conception!!

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    ooo Yeah! Good idea, shh!

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    ACT II

    "Sir, sir, I found them! I FOUND THEM!!!!! They are at Lockley Villiage"

    The voice belonged to a Hunch-back, dwarfed, bony man - Fras. - He was devious and trecherous - a SPY. But has ALWAYS been loyal to Enot.

    Enot dug his hand into his long, black, cloak-pocket, and pulled out four golden credits. He turned toward Fras: "For your efforts"....

    For 2 and 0 years, Enot had DREAMED of this day - when rsk and shh would be found. ...however, with the news, also came a 'whirlwind' of emotion...

    ...the mere 'thought' of RSK made Enots' stomach twist. His desire to seek revenge on RSK was aparant, from the FIRE in his eyes...
    and his love for shh! filled his hollow heart with hope and pain...


    HOWEVER...........Enot knew that his EMOTIONS must be concealed. He was about to embark on an adventure. Lockley villiage was 6 days and 7 nights away - He had time to prepare. He would gather 3 of his MEN to assist him. The journey to Lockley villiage was dangerous.
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    Enot (TONE), devised a plan:

    He would conceal himself in his new identity, and come FACE to FACE with RSK and Shh! If things went to plan, RSK and Shh! would welcome Enot to their house. Enot will befriend them, and gain their TRUST.

    When the time is right, he will KILL RSK and reviel himself to Shh!

    HOWEVER, AS WITH ALL LOVE STORIES - THERE ARE ALWAYS TWISTS TO THE TWIST!

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    This part of the story, will be next weeks 'episode' - ACT III. Here, Enot and his three men will journey the 6 days and 7 nights to Lockley villiage. On the way, the three men are killed, and Enot meets a lady - Junsui. She is a farmer (or is she). STAY TUNED!
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    (continued from next week)...............on the 7th night, Enot and Junsui were closer to Lockley, than they thought...

    "i see the villiage gates", said Junsui in desperation

    (They hadn't drank water or ate food in DAYS.)

    After a few more steps, Enot found himself standing by a small stream of water. Junsui started sipping, but Enot stood still. He gazed into the distance...he eyed the villiage gates, and the torch of fire on either side. 'RSK will be right under my nose!'..........he thought with a smile.


    Junsui got up, and wiped her face, "let's go", Enot said. They made their way to the front gates. A friendly face approached them.....it was the gatekeeper, Jaye.

    Said Jaye..."Welcome to Lockley villiage, how may i help you?".

    Replied Enot..."We come in peace. We have been banished from our states, we seek refuge here"

    Jaye was confused - Is this Legal? - he thought! "Come in, I will call a Senator to meet with you..."

    Enot and Junsui waited patiently....NERVOUSLY, but patient, nonetheless.


    In the gloomy fog of the night, apprached a figure toward Enot. He was tall, and wore clothes of a noble man. COULD THIS BE RSK? - thought Enot. As the figure approached, Enot could see the wrinkles in his face - he was THAT close!...

    ...The Senator put a name to his face...

    "Welcome, my name is RSK, one of 7 Senators of this City"

    Enot slowly lowerd his left hand, which found it's way to his inside left cloak pocket. his fingers gripped the handle of his army knife. he felt sweat coming from his forehead. He GRIPPED his knife...and his whole body became stiff.......it ALL could've ended here. Just ONE strike to the throat.....

    .........he regained his senses. 'Not now, not now - he thought'

    Instead, he let go of his grip, and reached out the arm to greet.....

    "And I am Enot, and this is Junsui", he felt releived.

    "Come to my quarters and rest tonight, you must be tired, please....", insisted RSK

    Enot agreed with a smile, and nod; the three of them made way.............







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    So, next week, we have the '6 days 7 nights adventure', and the week after, we have the 'NEXT MORNING', when Enot meets Shh! and gains the trust of RSK.......things are heating up in Lockley !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

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    Oh WOW! Rsk you are really good at writing stories!!!! I'm very impressed!
    If you can't handle the thorns, don't crave the rose!!

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    In the meantime, Enot is sleeping with Junsui. And you expect us to believe that he would still be interested in pursuing me?


    hahahahahahahahahhahaaha

    "Jaye was confused - Is this Legal? - he thought!" <-- This part made me laugh!

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    thx rosebud, lol shh!

    a love triangle is developing. junsui is in love with Enot. Enot in love with Shh, and Shh torn between RSK and Enot.

    when Junsui learns of her half sister, shh, then this will 'expand' the story

    and on top of all this, Enot is out to murder RSK

    the suspense is 'killing' me ................ literally AND figuratively lol

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    LOL... I know I start picturing what your posting and then I start laughing because of the side comments like jaye saying "is this legal?" I'm anticipating next week! .....so far away!
    If you can't handle the thorns, don't crave the rose!!

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    have i been killed off yet?

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    You'd better put misombra back into this story, or she will have her knights slay you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by misombra
    have i been killed off yet?
    No, you are at your castle with Cybog, eagerly anticipating the return of your daughter, shh!

    you will later realize that you have ANOTHER daughter, Junsui. She herself doesn't know she is a princess...

    ...and guess who is the father of Junsui? OV! OV is the kings personal assistant.

    Well, this is a side story. Things will make sense as the story proceeds.

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    lol Good story RSK. lol OV my father? That should be interesting.

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    Good stuff!

    That "Is this legal?" part had me rollin, too... LoL nice work, RK.. things are getting INTENSE!

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    Is it next week yet?
    If you can't handle the thorns, don't crave the rose!!

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    It's Monday.

    ^_^

    I haven't seen RK in awhile though

    Hope he's okay!

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    I'm sure he is fine. It is probably just that he is preparing for finals...

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