To start off the birth of this wonderful place, I'm submitting something that a few people have already read (Appologize)...but something to hold while I get some new poetry going.
To That Signficant Other,
This love, I cannot erase. This feeling of depth that is emotion, filling my heart with pressure, I cannot explain. You lay there sleeping, silent to the world, but not from your dreams. These dreams, images of a past. The past filled with wishes, hopes, and every smile that sent another one to the stars. I walk around and see the ghosts that haunt my eyes, because my eyes are connected to my mind...and in that mind the memories of a utopia I once knew, surround me. Its the wind that slightly touches my skin, and breezes past my ear...whispering your soft words of love. Yours eyes are wiry, but everytime you see me, tears of an unknown future roll down your check, captivating a 1000 lifetimes of uncertainty. Would you grab my hand again and touch the stars, would you climb to the peaks of mountain tops that is heaven and reach for it once more? The songs from my heart, I'd whisper in your ear as we lay in our emotions, breathing in the taste of a greatness unachieved by mere men, and in this we become gods...and you are my goddess. I am bound by my promises, by the sunset falling to rise another day in its glory of 3 words that mean so much. 3 words that take 3 seconds to say, and a lifetime to explain. You captivated my heart, now you hold the keys of immortality. Take my hand again love, and let me embrace your body once more, for this is...my eternal heaven.
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29-01-04, 07:13 AM #1
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To Start it off...
Last edited by Innova; 29-01-04 at 07:15 AM.
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29-01-04, 07:55 AM #2
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that's my fav too....
Love is so blissful when you find that perfect match. The one that holds the answers to all the questions.
*sigh* ... someday...
"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
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" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
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"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... Lord, whats his name....
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29-01-04, 08:23 AM #3
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I'm glad you like it.
I honestly didn't know it was that powerful when you told me about reading it to your friends.
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29-01-04, 08:29 AM #4
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Like it? I love it...
"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... Lord, whats his name....
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir
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29-01-04, 11:43 AM #5
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Oh jeez.. . . . GET A ROOM!
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29-01-04, 12:28 PM #6
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ROFL!! I want a Presidential sweet then, with a King sized bed (with some rose pedals). Bottle of Wine, some candles, and a big ass tub, with some jets.
Oh, HBO is good too..., also I have to have ESPN. Can i get a mint on my pellow too?
*looks over*
Jane, you need anything while room service is here?
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29-01-04, 01:18 PM #7
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*from next door**looks over*
Jane, you need anything while room service is here?
Can you two shut up in there! Real Sex 32 is on my HBO and I'm trying to wack off! Damn internet relationships meeting in hotels . . . . . .
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This is awesome and then some? Wait gotta have the champaign tub guys!!! Oh yea!!! Bring the body paints...
Wheres the vibrating bed? Bring lots of quarters..haha
I loved that poem, it was from the heart, I think when people have the natural gift of writing such intimate thoughts it's important to share them. I too write but in a different sense.
It really does help work through your own things. Keep bringing them on Innova! You've got a real talent...everything happens for a reason...beginning to wonder why.
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29-01-04, 08:23 PM #9
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Vibrating bed...yes sir!!
Thanks Squirrley, means a lot
ROFL sfalexi!
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um.. Zekk... and we are complete!Originally posted by Innova
ROFL!! I want a Presidential sweet then, with a King sized bed (with some rose pedals). Bottle of Wine, some candles, and a big ass tub, with some jets.
Oh, HBO is good too..., also I have to have ESPN. Can i get a mint on my pellow too?
*looks over*
Jane, you need anything while room service is here?
"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... Lord, whats his name....
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir
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30-01-04, 12:19 AM #11
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Glad I finally got mentioned. I thought I was getting replaced.
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30-01-04, 12:26 AM #12
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... you are my first thought... besides... reread what Innova wrote? How could I forget you?
"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... Lord, whats his name....
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir
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30-01-04, 02:42 AM #13
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LoL Zekk, its all in good graces and fun. I have a love in my life, Janes a sweet women however.
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30-01-04, 05:33 AM #14
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love is a beautiful thing.....
"Remember always, that you not only have the right to be an individual, you have an obligation to be one."
- - Eleanor Roosevelt
" It's not who we are that holds us back, it's who we think we're not."
- - Michael Nolan
"...to love and lose, is better than not to love at all..." .... Lord, whats his name....
" The world is big... I want to see all of it before it gets dark." -- John Muir
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