Not Quite a Poem (by my brother)

[Junket]

he sits on his porch thinking;
When do I get a turn?
When do I get a shot at success?
Am I ever going to have a comfortable life?
Do I have a soul mate?
If I do, will I ever find her?
Do people like me?
Am I a nice person?
How come I don't have more friends?
he is scared of living a life that no one will remember.
Do I help people?
I hope there are some people who need me.
Have I left my mark?
Do I have a mark to leave?

When am I going to die?
I hope it's not soon.
I still have alot to do.

This is somethin' my brother Jim DeNofa wrote while in high school.

[Kazan]

any way i try and word this it's gonna sound a bit rude....
odd..curious..a bit interesting....not sure really what to think...**Stumped**

[shh!]

I think it is something that anyone with an IQ over 90 can relate to at one point in their life or another.

[Kazan]

I think you need to learn your place and shut up.Your rudeness is ****ing pissing me off now.

[Late_vamp]

KAZAN , exactly my thoughts ...hey SHH!, why dont you try doing like your name and just SHHHHH

[Junket]

I think you need to learn your place and shut up.Your rudeness is ****ing pissing me off now.

I don't understand your hostility towards Shh, but I didn't sense anything offensive towards you personally from her statement.

What's goin' on Shh?

Have you been pickin' on these guys?

[shh!]

Oooh! So sensitive! Read it again boys! I said * at one point in their lives or another *, people will relate to this poem. I didn't say YOUR IQs are < 90. If you cannot relate, don't worry, you will.

Sheesh!

[Junket]

Sheesh!

My thoughts exactly.

[Kazan]

I've seen nothing but negativity from Shh since i joined,and i am bloody sick of it.Not that i'm taking it personal..but i did't join this forum so i could listen to someones pissy negativity because they have no respect for people.

[Junket]

I've seen nothing but negativity from Shh since i joined,and i am bloody sick of it.Not that i'm taking it personal..but i did't join this forum so i could listen to someones pissy negativity because they have no respect for people.

If you don't like 'er that much then don't respond to her.

She's just as much part of this forum as you are and if you can't deal with it don't come here anymore.

I've done my fair share of offending and an equal amount of being offended.

If that's something you can't deal with then stop posting.

Simple as that.

And another thing, I'd have to say you were completely out of line and off topic with your comment.

[shh!]

Then go away. I was here first.

[Late_vamp]

now its getting childish ...

[shh!]

That's kinda funny, coming from someone who apparently thinks it is mature to tell people who disagree with them to hush rather than engage them in dialogue.

[Kiechi]

Then go away. I was here first.

Erm, is it wrong to find this comment :: shudders :: "cute"? Haha.

People calm down.

[Tone]

Erm, is it wrong to find this comment :: shudders :: "cute"? Haha.

hahaha I thought the same thing when I read it...

shh! is truely the coolest.