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    Jumping on the band wagon

    alright, this poem was in fact inspired by Phantom of the Opera..if it's not terribly obvious. not one of my better ones...

    BUT ANYWAY HERE IT IS

    I have a mind to avoid him
    I have an eye to glance.
    The mystery of his existance
    Left my will without a chance.

    Dressed in black and masked.
    I wonder what lies behind.
    His heart and eyes, and lips,
    and mouth, i have a heart to find.

    His voice ignites desires.
    His touch sends eager chills.
    I feel him in my mind and heart.
    He holds the hand that kills.

    turned toward the light that blinds me,
    It's from his eyes, i see.
    And when i'm wounded at the heart,
    He's the one that bleeds.

    And when his eyes burn into mine,
    A breath i cannot take.
    A struggle i give up willingly,
    From these arms i dare not escape.

    "In the future, everyone will be famous for 15 minutes..." -Andy Warhol

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    I like it :)

    Now I really REALLY wanna see that movie

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    I read it this morning at work - and I like it even more ;p

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    Eh, I don't like the Phantom of the opera...

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    and the phantom of the opera doesn't like you either!

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    Nice love poem. Are you gay?

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    Steve is a she!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tone
    Steve is a she!!

    So a picture might lead you believe. Could be he putting up a she. Never know.
    Speak less. Say more.

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    Nah - I've chatted with her. A guy couldn't fake that kind of cuteness.

    Plus she takes a lot of pictures! Hmm next time I talk to her I'll have her take a picture that says "Hi Tony" on a piece of paper or written on her hand. Then we'll know the TRUTH....

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